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gate by aozorize gate by aozorize
EDIT: Wow thanks for the DD! that was really unexpected O_O
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I rushed this a bit. One day I'll go back and fix it.

I feel like I've been neglecting my dA a little...

In case anybody was wondering about the brief disappearance: it's really nothing to worry about.
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Daily Deviation

Given 2011-11-23
gate by ~aozorize ( Suggested by kirakira14 and Featured by Negatic )
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rifandesign Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014
Wooowww love it
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:icondigitalartaficianado:
I love pieces like this that tell stories... :-)
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:iconneon-crystallum:
neon-crystallum Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012  Hobbyist
Love your work, aozo, I'm a fan!
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:iconchrista-kinde:
Christa-Kinde Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2012   Writer
Fascinating concept. As I peruse the details, I feel as if I'm picking up clues about the story behind the scene! Well done!
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:iconsecondhandben:
secondhandben Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2012
Wow! This is fantastic. :heart:
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shanree Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2011  Student
Hey Aozo!

Sorry I didn't get to this till now - have also been swamped with work. Am actually taking a break from painting my mother's Christmas present. So, onto the critiquing! :D

Can't tell you how happy this makes me to see you work on the female figure as well as the background. I'm appreciative since it means you're taking my critiques into consideration when doing art, and I'm truly grateful.

Let's start with the female figure. You're getting better: slender figure, not as masculine, etc. I'm just a little curious about her overall pose. Is she squatting or sitting? It's a little unclear at the moment, and needs to be pushed further. Also, her body is curving to the right and very forward. This is fine. Just make sure she is still balanced.

As for the overall balance of the picture, it looks rather good. I tilted the picture so the horizon line would be level, and drew in lines to see how well everything worked. There's nothing I can critique on - great work!

Foreground needs to be further developed to help us see all the different plane changes. The metal slabs on the bottom left of the picture are foreground (from my understanding), the sled (?) and your characters would be midground, and rest is background. Please correct me if wrong so I can help you with how your picture reads. Your understanding of color and atmospheric perspective is good. I would just push it a little more so we can really read those plane changes. So more tones and tints in the background (not a lot).

Detail on the sled and man's clothing are looking great. Shapes are solid, and read well - keep going at it. :)

Anatomy of both characters and statues are looking good. Clothing on man looks great and read well - especially loving the folds and overlaps. For the girl, it needs to be further developed. The girl has very fair skin, and the dress is white. However, there should be a distinction that one is dress and the other is skin. As of now, it looks like the two are morphing together, which am guessing is unintentional. Just have a clear edge (show overlap) and should fix it right up. Fold near her waist are looking great.

Kept critique relatively short since you plan to work on it further, and may already see potential changes (since this was posted over a month ago). Keep up the great work, and I look forward to seeing the changes!
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sw-e Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2012
I thought that skin and dress were supposed to morph together
especially since it's on her arms too
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shanree Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2012  Student
I'm not sure whether the morphing look was intentional or not, which is why I pointed it out (just in case). :)
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sw-e Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2012
oh okay, I was just sharing my opinion on the matter
yep
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Colicade Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
It is so wonderful! You did an awesome job here. <3
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:iconeloelay:
eloelay Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2011
this is absolutely beautiful!
love the coloring
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:iconjazireh:
Jazireh Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2011
Beautiful!
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Angie-Pictures Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2011
Beautiful work! Congratulations on the DD! :iconflowerheartplz:
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:icondeath-note-luva13:
death-note-luva13 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I totally set this up at my desktop background <3
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:iconstutter-freak:
stutter-freak Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011
The colours and shading in this are breath taking.
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:iconmartael:
Martael Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011
Beautiful, beautiful piece of work!
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:iconakosimiki:
akosimiki Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Daaaaaamn! This is bad-ass! Love it!
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BETA368 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011
For teh lulz :)
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:iconakosimiki:
akosimiki Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ahaha
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BETA368 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011
Hehehehehehehehehehe, hehehehehHAHAHAHA, HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAH HA HA HA!
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akosimiki Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
huwow. . .easy now XD
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BETA368 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2011
Easy? EASY!?! That's as easy as peasy-lemon-SQUEAZY!
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:iconbeta368:
BETA368 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011
No, this is how you do it!
*Leans back with a shocked expression* DAAAAAAAAAAAMN!
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akosimiki Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
+1
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:iconcelestalina:
Celestalina Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Very nice! Congrats on the DD. :]
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:iconsai27:
Sai27 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011  Student Interface Designer
wow really amazing, I love the coloring and everything. it's new style and perfect job.*
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:iconjoct:
Joct Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
"I rushed this one a bit."
"-I'll go back and fix it."
"I've been neglecting my DA a little..."
Y U SO MODEST
IT LOWERS EVERYONE ELSES 'ARTIST' ESTEEM.
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ExileFallen Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice!
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:iconpuhnastik:
Puhnastik Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011
looks like alive
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:iconjakit:
Jakit Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011  Student General Artist
oh my gosh wow!!! that is so amazing!! wonderful work!!
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R3cl41m3r Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Lovely!!!
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Midna-dosta Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011  Hobbyist
i love this
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:icondmastermanga:
dmastermanga Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
reminds me of ICO
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:iconjaffar8:
Jaffar8 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011
this from something?
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:iconchyna-angel-girl:
Chyna-Angel-Girl Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It's beautiful! :D
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Chameleon-Veil Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Rushed or not, there're definitely some impressive visuals in this piece. I really like it, nice work.
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djwassabi Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011
Love the perspective and sense of scale...if this is your rush work...wow.
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redflowerblooming Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
beautiful lighting!! :D
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:iconkeleus:
Keleus Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Great art! But why female character look so sad?
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TheSilverBells Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I love the chalky look of her hands <3
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XxXSabiXxX Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wow, so adorable... *_*
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:iconrusodejota:
RUSOdeJOTA Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011  Professional Interface Designer
great atmosphere, and the composition reminds me to the final Kefka. A worthy DD all the way
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:iconoscar-ojisan:
oscar-ojisan Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011   Artist
...beautiful..:heart:
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:iconmogereo:
mogereo Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Very beautiful... I like your style!
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:iconmad-penguin-rico:
Mad-Penguin-Rico Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
This is great :)
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:icondisneylyric:
Disneylyric Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011  Student General Artist
Looks like a cool story.
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gt500x Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes it's so well drawn and painted.
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:icontralkan:
Tralkan Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011  Student Digital Artist
cool! :D
love the fantastic atmosphere of this piece
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:iconamarreia:
aMarreia Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011  Professional Artist
Love the brushwork and the textures. Nicely done!
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AncientArk Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Very nice!
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